After I spoke to Jo on friday about my publication she suggested it could be represented in a more visual way and she liked my original idea of cutting the pages. Since then I have made some corrections adding cut out elements and also introducing so valuable quotes from The Meaning of style from semioticians Stuart Hall and Umberto Eco. I am happy with the out come and feel I have maintained that punk DIY aesthetic I was going for conveying my messages clearly and in an interesting way.
Mistakes// Corrections
I decided to add a vibrant pink as suggested in the crit
but I feel this takes away its cheap throw away feel.
Corrected Version
I cut out holes revealing the punks eyes on the next page.
Which is related to the safety pins.
Same again with the Bin Bag Clothing
I added in quotes too hand writing them then scanning them in.
I am really happy with the outcome.
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